This fair-copy poem-draft was found among Dickinson's papers after her death.
Though it was composed around 1871 (THJ, RWF), several years after she had ceased
binding her work into manuscript volumes, the poem has been carefully copied and
may constitute evidence that Dickinson continued, at least on occasion, to prepare
manuscripts for binding in the 1870s. For a fair-copy of the poem sent to Thomas
Wentworth Higginson, see BPL Higg 26 (about
1871 [THJ, RWF]); for a related fragment, see A 351 /
352 (about 1871 [RWF], about 1871 or last decade [THJ]). A variant
version of the first stanza, not containing the trace-fragment, was sent to Susan
Dickinson (H 322). The fragment may have catalyzed the composition of the poem;
alternatively, it may have broken free from the poem sometime after its
composition. It carries a variant reading not incorporated into any of the three
versions of the poem. The definitive compositional history of the textual
constellation remains open to speculation.
Three editorial notations are penciled on the recto of A 95-12: at top, center,
SHGD?: ++; upper right, MTB: II;
upper right: ?. The pencil crosses may indicate Susan
Dickinson's or, possibly, Lavinia Dickinson's ranking of the poem; the notation
II indicates that the text—or a version of
it—was published in Poems, 2d ser. The authorship and
significance of the ? are not known.
< a95-12.txt.1; poem >
Step lightly on this narrow spot - The broadest
Land that grows Is not so ample as the Breast These
Emerald Seams enclose.
Step lofty, for this name be told As far as
Cannon dwell Or Flag subsist
or Fame
Export Her deathless Syllable.